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In London , was a taxi driver , Alfred colin .he drives for 70 years .
while he was 92 aged , the transport center celebrated his retirement time and for tributing him and his family award a present at a specially ceremony in the caffee shop.
His co-workers appreciated to his hard-working .Mr . collin definded his memoires to others . he said , " I learned many things from my passengers , and it was a great privilege for me . " He feel happiness for sterling service to people and appreciate to his wife for supporting . his long life and health secret was in dont worry and enjoy current affairs .
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Following a special ceremony given to honor an exemplary English citizen for his dedicated public service, a 92 year old Taxi driver was awarded by Transport for London institute. Alfred Collins who is London's longest serving taxi driver called his service/job a pleasure
البته این هنوز کامل نیست
دارم کاملش میکنم
چطوره
خوشحال میشم اول نظرتون بدونم بعد بقیشو بنویسم
البته خواهش میکنم[tafakor]
خیلی خوبه .
موفق باشید
تشکر
میدونین هر کاری یه فرمولی داری برای خلاصه نویسی هم فرمول وجود داره
روشی که من استفاده میکنم
اینکه نکات مهم رو به صورت عبارت دقت کنید عبارت نه جمله منویسم حالا هر چی متن بلند تر باشه نکات مهتر بالطبع انتخاب میشن
بعد نوبت هنر گرامر میرسه با استفاده از گرامر این عبارتها را بهم میچسبونم و جمله درست میکنم
بگین ما هم استفاده کنیم .
لطفا مشکلات متن منو بگین [cheshmak]
خب دامنه لغت خیلی مهمه اگه مترادف خوب بلد باشین جملاتون متنوعتر میشه
During his speech at the ceremony, Collins called his job an opportunity to get more experience and communication skills. David Brown, Managing Director of Surface Transport praised him a lot.
Its worthy to name some of his most important passengers : Margaret Thatcher, Joan Collins and Bruce Forsyth
In spite of his old age he is still in good shape and health
Following a special ceremony given to honor an exemplary English citizen for his dedicated public service, a 92 year old Taxi driver was awarded by Transport for London institute. Alfred Collins who is London's longest serving taxi driver called his service/job a pleasure.During his speech at the ceremony, Collins called his job an opportunity to get more experience and communication skills. David Brown, Managing Director of Surface Transport praised him a lot.Its worthy to name some of his most important passengers : Margaret Thatcher, Joan Collins and Bruce ForsythIn spite of his old age he is still in good shape and healthاینم کل متن
و اما مشکلات متن خانم نارون
البته ضمن عذرخواهی به دلیل جسارت
نقل قول:
نوشته اصلی توسط نارون1
there was a man named alfered Collins who has served as a taxi driver for 70 years in London
at the age of 92 the transport centre celebrated him a retirement ceremony in which he was awarded for his dedicated service
he gave a speech in the ceremony admiring his jobNot being worry and enjoying current affairs were the factors he counted for having such a long life
Bad Tooth
A man and his wife entered the dentist's office.
"I want a tooth pulled," the woman said. "We are in a big hurry, so let us not fool around with gas or Novocain or any of that stuff."
"You are a very brave woman," remarked the dentist. "Which tooth is it?"
"Show him your bad tooth, honey," said the lady to her husband
Judge booted for flipping coin to decideA judge who ordered a woman to drop her pants and decided a custody dispute by flipping a coin was removed from the bench by the Virginia Supreme Court on Friday. The decision against Juvenile and Domestic Relations Court Judge James Michael Shull of Gate City was unanimous.
"Unless our citizens can trust that judges will fairly resolve the disputes brought before our courts, and treat all litigants with dignity, our courts will lose the public's respect and confidence upon which our legal system depends," Justice Barbara Milano Keenan wrote.
According to the court, Shull admitted tossing a coin to determine which parent would have visitation with a child on Christmas. Shull said he was trying to encourage the parents to decide the issue themselves but later acknowledged that he was wrong.
The pants-dropping incidents, the court said, "were even more egregious."
The court said they occurred when a woman was seeking a protective order against a partner who she said had stabbed her in the leg. Shull knew the woman had a history of mental problems and insisted on seeing the wound, the court said.
The woman dropped her pants once to display the wound, then dropped them a second time after Shull left the bench for a closer look to determine whether the woman had received stitches.A court bailiff testified before the commission that after the hearing, he asked Shull, "Did you see what that lady had on?" According to the bailiff, Shull replied: "Yeah, a black lacy thing ... it looked good, didn't it?"
Shull denied making the comment. His attorney, Russell V. Palmore, did not immediately return a phone call seeking comment Friday.The justices could have merely censured Shull, but they noted that he had appeared before the Judicial Inquiry and Review Commission in 2004 for allegedly calling a teenager a "mama's boy" and a "wuss" and advising a woman to marry her abusive boyfriend. That complaint was dismissed with an admonition to Shull to chalk it up as a learning experience
این متن برای آخر هفته روش کار کنین و خلاصه کنین
خب امیدوارم کار امروزم بدردتون بخورده باشه من فردا و پس فردا نیستم
اما خدا بخاد شنبه میام و ادامه میدیم با یه ایالت جدید
و مطالب متنوع دیگه
have a nice weekend
Have a nice weekend too [cheshmak][golrooz]
bye
hi sorry due to have some problems
I could not come over here
ofcourse I am still a bit sick
but i will try to do my best as before
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نوشته اصلی توسط raha78
?What's the matter
....I'm so sorry
God bless you
[golrooz]
The text which is actually a piece of news tells us about an unusual event at a court in states where a judge did something unethical and embarrassing. Some people called it a shame for all the courts. Such actions will make the people not to trust in justice system, another judge was quoted as saying.
Tossing a coin and asking a woman to drop her pants were the actions judge James Michael Shull did.
above is quotation of what the text tells
متن بالا خلاصه خبر کوتاهی است که چهارشنبه گذشته برای خلاصه نویسی گذاشتم
it was nothing worth mentioningنقل قول:
نوشته اصلی توسط نازخاتون
call it an old habit
thanx anyway
It will be a cold day in hell if.....
تو فارسی میگیم اگه آفتاب از مغرب طلوع کنه
مثلا
it will be a cold day in hell if sally marries Jim
مگه آفتاب از مغرب طلوع کنه که سالی با جیم ازدواج کنه
به عبارتی زمانی که چیزی خیلی بعید به نظر بیاد از این اصطلاح استفاده میکنیم
now its turn of states
خب حالا نوبت معرفی ایالتهاست
ایالت امروز
Ohio
It is a Midwesternstate in the United States. The 34th largest state by area in the U.S., it is the 7th-most populous with nearly 11.5 million residents containing several major American cities and seven metropolitan areas with populations of 500,000 or more. The state's capital is Columbus
Ohio means Great River
did u know that I have a friend there
میدونستین من یه دوست تو اهایو دارم
اسمش هست
jeremy trick
از امروز یه داستان طولانی میذارم به صورت ساده شده و بخش بخش
هر بخش را جداگانه تلخیص میکنیم
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so
I think it's enough for this section.i`m ready to hear your points about this .
Any way, wholeheartedly wish, all of you, success with flying colors.
and
have a nice weekend